The feedback i got about my collage magazine cover wasn't to good.
i was told that i didn't have much structure and that what i did was really basic, for example the positioning of my front cover picture wasn't placed very well and said that i needed to have put it in the middle. that the font sizes wasn't to good as my date was larger than my normal text and there was no need to underline the title. however he said that my choice of colour was every good along with the front cover picture its self as its shows he has pride in his college and with himself.
the feedback with my content's page while it was better than my cover wasn't to good either as it is not interesting, two of the images were not to good and could have been of better quality as the second picture is too dark to see and the bottom picture wasn't a very good exmaple of art and long with that there was no Ict picture with is a subject i mention a lot. while there are many problems with it there is some good as the top picture not only was good because of the angle but also looks good to look at and the font is controlled well.
the targets i have made for my next magazine is to:
1. have a varity of picture from different shots and angles
2. have a better struture of the magazine
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